I sit here with a smile on my face,
I smile as I breathe in deep,
I smile as I close my eyes
and I smile all day long;
the sky is dark,
as the freezing winds
seep into my bones,
I sit here smiling silently cold and empty;
I wait here frozen in time,
with my dreams torn apart,
my heart encased in a tomb,
I smile to mask my true emotions;
smile is all that I do day in and day out,
the mask that I wear is so perfect,
one needs to come a lot closer,
to see the tears trickling down my eyes;
the days are long,
the nights longer still.
I try to find the light,
but find comfort only in the dark;
emotions swell inside,
walking on a broken path,
I look up for the rainbow
hoping that one day I will get off
this broken path and onto a new one;
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A broken smile is a smile that is false to hide the pain inside!!!
29 comments
This is so sad=( yet so true… to hide the pain inside=(
I really like this, it evokes sadness and longing for a new path (following the rainbow)… and hope that this new path is attainable. this will be one of my Fav’s…. thanks
This is a fantastic piece of poetry and evokes such raw emotion. It flows so well and makes ecellent use of repetition.
fabulous…praveen your thoughts resonate with me
vry beautiful and true…….hats off
vry emotinol
great poem, i think we all go through that sometime in our life
nice poetry and deeply coming truly from heart.it is what am feeling in my life.
owsome
owsome…..g8
Love this poem but it is sad to read.
hey……superb yaar……it’s just like a teen’s life..
very…tru…i like it…as it relates such incident of human life in wich he has to smile sumtime for himself…or for others or on situation demand…or to hide pain….
let ur tear b rolled down wid da water of cuming rain….
gr88….*****
heart touching..hats off..
its too good
its true………..great…..
Who is the author?
The author is Praveen.
its beautiful
that i believe is as real as it gets
what’s the author’s last name?
The author is Praveen Kumar
Story of my life.
I smiled everyday..
Anybody thought I’m prefect.
Smile is not hurt to do.
I smiling in everyday, in every minutes, and in every second.
No one can stop my beautiful smile <3
Sometimes, I can smile in the he.. day, It was not fun to do.
Stay smile, it would make your future better. <3
i like this poem
sadness embedded in a smile – beautiful
Thank you Tina.
really a heart touching as well as true
this piece has just difined me. i feel like the writer had me in mind when writing this poem
love it