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sitting in the room,
thinking about everything so far,
i am beginning to wonder
if life is supposed to be like this;
high on a pedestal one day,
kissing the dirt the next,
the balance keeps tilting
from the good to the bad;
nobody said life would be easy and simple,
but nobody said life can be so hard,
struggling through a hazy cloud of confusion,
life seems a bitch;
one hand giving things not asked,
while the other not giving things asked,
it’s like taking one step forward,
and two steps backward;
disheartened and feeling the blues,
the road to happiness seems to be enigmatic,
in this crystal maze of life
the game goes on until the end;
14 comments
Beautiful… 🙂
Thank you.
Looking forward to your next poem.
I really liked this poem and i hope you keep writing.
I dont usually leave comments for something I read, but after reading what you’ve created, I felt the need of thanking you.
Im and 18year old student, and right now, I am going through a phase of my life : cloudy, blurry, and a tournado of question marks and confusions happening that give me the feeling that happinness is a thousand miles away.. sadly, we live in a world where good people have to fight, and the bad ones can have it easy..
but we have to keep believing in a better tomorrow, and climb up on top of the pedestal all over again.. after all, if life wasnt such a bumpy ride and a challenge, it wouldnt be as much interesting..
fighting for a better tomorrow.. And wishing you all the best!
Sending love all the way from Morocco.
Asmaâ. 🙂
yah cute!!!very creative..I like it.
keep on doing this great
its just soooo inspireing and creative really just fasinating 🙂
Awesome
I love dis poem soo much it’s beautiful Praveen u are telling a story and people dat go through struggles are the ones with heart. So keep yo head up praveen don’t let nothing keep u down.
Keep up the good job! This is very nice. 🙂
i loved it but i didn’t like the word that you put in when it said this: ‘Life seems like a bitch’you could’ve left that word out and put some-thing else in there to make that sound better, but other than that it was a good poem i loved it, but that one word that you should’ve left out
very nice! great lines! 🙂
i wouldn’t agree with you on that gege ramon