as the rains continue to batter,
standing on the balcony
i watch the rain drops
converge into one pool of water;
i wish you were here
standing next to me
in this rain soaked night,
holding hands, scheming of things pretty;
Wondering to myself, so late at night,
what is it that attracts me to you?
Thinking to myself, why are you always on my mind?
What power do you have in what you do?
thinking about where i stood,
i try to push you out of my mind,
but every time i push you out of my thoughts,
you crawl back into my world and fill my senses;
it’s so hard to keep smiling
and continue denying what i feel
i don’t know why,
a thousand reasons i have none;
i can’t go on like this,
i can’t pretend everything is fine,
when i just wanna be with you
hold you tight tonight and every night;
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The simple lack of her is more to me than others’ presence. ~Edward Thomas
[W]hen you realize you want to spend the rest of your life with somebody, you want the rest of your life to start as soon as possible. ~Nora Ephron, When Harry Met Sally
If I had a single flower for every time I think about you, I could walk forever in my garden. ~Claudia Ghandi
If you press me to say why I loved him, I can say no more than because he was he, and I was I. ~Michel de Montaigne
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41 comments
oh i see the poet is back to form :).. super good…
cheers
Thank you 🙂
Kinda inspired by ur recent poem 😉
I am 14 years old i been working on for almsy for 15 years. thanks you from precious
i am a 12 year boy that fell in love wit poems plz make more like this
this poem is beutiful and very touching for me. i sourd of went thru the same thing. this poem really saw how i felt. i love it that the fact that when you write this, you not only write it with expression but with lots of emotion. and to me its lke you let it all out and said everything you felt. right when i read this, i could picture it al in my head, it’s like a story to me. a beautiful one.
the poem is so touchable and heartfelt…..a beautiful one which will remain forever
omg
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OMGsh. wow
i am in love with dis poem
The simple lack of him is more to me than others’ presence.
Really like this one.. it is like you know exactly what I am going thru right now.. makes me truely believe there is a light at the end of this tunnel I feel I am in at the moment
ooooooooown *-* hey, i’m from brazil , and I reaaaaaaly love this poem . THAAAAANKS ,
Beautiful words wonderful story
i dont have words..
Your words bring powerful emotion to your story. Excellent work.
David Bohmiller
very powerful poem its heartfelt it is how i feel about a past lover from so long ago .
wow this is a great poem!!!! i love it 🙂
Very nice ……..
touches to the memories….
Very touching. I know what that feels like. Makes me remember the good times with my ex
wow I’m a 14 year old girl that fell in love with your work!!!! congrats!
omg its supper i am huge fan of urs…..:-)
i love poems. they inspire me. they make me think of life and love each day. adn make me realize that its just enough to make it through. i thank all poets for looking in your heart and writing it down on paper and inspring those who look for hope.
wat a poem!!!!!!! m speechlesssssss!!! O.O
This is an awesome poem for all those in love!
The poem is good I really like it alot I write poetry too and it inspires me more to and I love reading poetry to get the aspects and influences everyone else has to write about life love and dreams.
i felt this is me in the poem because i love my husband so much ill always like to be with him
The true feel of a lover transformed to words. The thoughts guides u so well ! Amazing , speechless … This is how I feel right now to my lov of life . Thanks.
realy nice.tanks
heart touching sir….
Beautiful!!! I loved it, so inspiring. Would you mind if I used parts of it in a song?? I will make sure to give you credit for writing such a wonderful poem!! 😀
i love this poem i hope my chrush does to 🙂
this poem is so wonderful and sweet
love it…at last i found home
No words………just wanna say all the best!
i like it verry much
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
i love this poem i can actually relate to this
Reading this made my night.
actually it is perfect,I enjoy it
I think the same its perfect Rukhy xxxx
i love this one really i do