searching for answers
that evaded me for so long,
i got lost in a maze of treachery
hidden under a mask of innocence;
it’s been so long
words kept me awake
all night long, making
me restless and confused;
drowning in the wishes
of a long lost past,
i let my life down,
i let myself down;
in the midst of the night
under the velvet skies
i surrendered to life
i whisper for forgiveness;
so with a smile on my lips
and a wish on my heart
i give faith(hope) one more reason
i give life another chance
to make my wish come true;
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What a wonderful life I’ve had! I only wish I’d realized it sooner – Sidonie Gabrielle
To accomplish great things, we must not only act, but also dream; not only plan, but also believe. – Anatole France
We are told never to cross a bridge until we come to it, but this world is owned by men who have ‘crossed bridges’ in their imagination far ahead of the crowd. – Unknown
Sometimes you just got to give yourself what you wish someone else would give you. – Dr Phil
43 comments
searching for answers
that evaded me for so long,
i got lost in a maze of treachery
hidden under a mask of innocence
wat’s that?? clarify… 🙂
nicely expressed.. tho i didn’t quite understand the deeper meaning
man,i luvvv dis poems 4realz
man i wish if i could rite dis poem 4realz man dammm i cant even sleep 2rite 4realz it make me a many thing to remember dat i wished before so i wish it come true….
wow what an amazing poem this is!!
Its very well writin indeed
I used this poem for my book club. I love the emotion in this poem and i got an A for it!!!! i could tell what you mean and are trying to say to wour readers. Keep on writing these awesome poems!!!!!! 🙂
srry *i can tell what you mean and are trying to say to your readers*
lol again u rock!!
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ur awesomely awesome
The Poem was AWESOME!!!!!!!
That was Great poem.
nice thoughts…….
you are speaking just what i feel right now.
really, i like good poems and few of your poems have made me your fan.
i am also interested in writing poems
can i sometimes drop in my poems here or wherever??
great words….
truly admirable simplicity and depth……
thats what i liked most about your words..
greatt work….loved it
can i also drop in some poems of my own??
Hi,
Please send them via email.
hey u hav written vry nice poems
Nice poem nicely written but some parts I cannot understand as well
like this poem. you showed what i feel now…
thank you.
I ENJOYED YOUR POEM..I KNOW FROM FRIST HAND ASKING FOR A WISH ALSO KNOWN AS A BLESSING….I FEEL U FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART….KEEPING THE FAITH…WE HAVE TO..
cool, i want my grandma to get me a dog i believe it will happen
cool:D
i luv da poem tha much man i wont stop reading it lmaoo 🙂
I know the excact same thing you were going through when u wrote that cuz i am going through it right now 🙁
what an amazing poem i have eva heard keep your good work!!
Dear God, you are real! I want you to make real wishes real wishing lobster wishker real wishing starlight starbright real wishing star fairy all come to life as long! I wish Jeff Becky Kelsey Loverude police security whole people from Massachusetts nipmuc school students teachers star program seniors Danielle work study Grandma Jan Erikson and her friends Aunt Julie Olsen and her family Uncle Ted Aunt Rhonda Bakken family Ms. Curran Brittany Bakken and her husband Luke Ashely Uncle Dave and their family Uncle Mike Cal and their family will all be Gone forever til seven days! No turning back! Amen
Dear God, we are going to keep real wishes safe for tomorrow! I believe in you and real wishes as long! I wish will you change me into a thirteen-year-old younger kid and make me live inside a Disney Princess Dream House next to hotel in South Carolina with my two new good warm good kind hearted sisters Anya age thirteen and Sara age nine mermaids food drinks money movie tickets my cats Andre Winsalow all the time til seven days! No turning back! Amen
this poem reminds me of my poems and am very thankful to jesus that we still have more poet like you around………..its lovely
vao
awesome poem….
ooo wao this is an awesome poem touches my heart deep inside really love this poem……….lovely
I have to say I have read several of your poems tonight, and they are truly fantastic. They make me enjoy the fact that I love reading poetry and writing it. All I can say is “Thank you”!!
I’m so glad you guys like my poem! I wrote it about myself.
Lovely poem!
awsme poem, so true so well written
really snobbish poem.. gr8 lines n awesome words.. 🙂
wats d deeper meaning of first para……if u plz cud tell????
nice poem
Simple and profound!!
YOU R TOOOOOO……GUD….
I LOVE DIZ POEM…
how could u man ! its really awesome. i wish i could talk 2 u ,i know u will better understand me than others.my soul speaks through ur poem.i just close my eyes after reading and it seems whatever is buried deep inside my heart is floating with ur words
Man u gave me the answers i was searching for last few days..thanks
i want something new in life oterwise i lose me.
awsme poem really v.deep
:-):-):-)fine beautiful:-):-):-)
Wow….The writer has very good thoughts….I love the poems of this writer…:)