at times i felt
i’ve come to the end of life
attempts to change
seems as futile as stupidity;
when the sun sets with a final red blaze
i tried to cross the borders of reality
into a world where my desires met
the dreams of tomorrow;
now i feel
i am on top of the world
nothing could go wrong
with my dreams coming true one by one
only time stands in the way of this one;
my whole life altered
in one single moment
giving a reason
for this mortal existence;
When you talk to me,
I feel like heaven when we talk,
I just can’t leave you
nor say goodbye to you;
So hard to write down
All I need to say
I find myself tongue tied
No right words come ’round
But each time I look at you
I hope you see it in my eyes
The love that shines for you;
searching for that longing touch
from the moment I looked into your eyes,
I knew my life was about to change,
i knew the love that i carry is
for you and you alone;
12 comments
I love this poem.
It reminds me of my and my boyfriend,,the love my my life!
ThiS iS aN amAziNg po3m yOu sHoUld coNtInUe 2 wRiTe po3tRy cuz ur r3alLy guD aT It .
Gud Job
That was wonderfull!! just amazing
wow i loved it amazing!!
wooooow its wonderful n amazing
too good .its just want i am facing in my life at present
it has strong feelings….very touching and close 2 reality:D
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Nice Job
Awesome point of view. Will come again. See you
Good post!
Will revisit
Nice thought!
Keep it up
This one is a lovely poem…. it reminds me of me and my sweet boyfriend.. we are so much in love… and u gave me the ryt way to xpress my love.. thnks a lott…. 🙂